I Feel Like An Overburdened Camel
And wish my husband could share more of the load — I love my husband, I do. Our relationship has improved since I last wrote about it here. I was at the end of my tether and we weren’t communicating. Our daughter is thriving. Ten Ways My Marriage Lacks Love And why is this so difficult to admit?medium.com We’ve both been looking after ourselves better, physically I mean. I’m doing more exercise and he eats…
I love this example of changing the headline.
I love this example of changing the headline. It is much better, I would have read the second, but not the first. I guess you are appealing to a person's ego, it appeals to basic human curiosity. The first one doesn't. I teach English as a foreign language, and it's an example I would use of when the main point of the story needs to be the subject of the sentence, which you didn't do in the first headline but did in the second. This is a great example of that rule and you can see the difference!
Maybe it would have had the same fate if I hadn’t changed the title. Maybe it’s all financed by the Spanish secret service and I fell right into their trap. If that’s the case, I’d like to point out that I like paella, so don’t hurt me.